This term we have been learning how to write  narritive texts.

We know that a narritive piece of text must have:

-an introduction

-a problem

-a sequence of events

-a resolution

We have had a go at rewriting Goldie Locks and the Three Bears.

Brock and the Unusual House

 

Once upon a time, there lived a small boy. His name was Brock. He was a piece of Broccoli.

 

After breakfast, Brock was walking in a Broccoli patch. He saw an unusual house sitting right in the middle of the garden, so he knocked on the door. He went inside. Nobody was there.

 

Brock saw three bowls of Butter Chicken on a weird looking table. He was ravenous.

“This curry is too spicy!” “This curry is too mild!” “This curry is just perfect!” Brock ate all of the Butter Chicken.

Brock was full up now. “This couch is way too big!” “This couch is way to big too!” “This couch is just perfect!” But the couch collapsed!

 

Brock wanted to sleep because he was very tired. He slowly crept up some creepy stairs.

“This bed is way too hard!” “This bed is way too soft!” “This bed is just perfect!”

 

Soon the Broccoli family came home. “Someone’s been eating my curry!” shouted Daddy Broccoli. “Someone’s been eating my curry!” shouted Mama Broccoli. “Someone’s been eating my curry – and it’s all gone!” shouted Baby Broccoli.

 

“Someone’s been sitting on my couch!” explained Daddy Broccoli. “Someone’s been sitting on my couch!” explained Mama Broccoli. “Someone’s been sitting on my couch – and it’s fallen into pieces!” explained Baby Broccoli.

 

“Someone’s been lying in my bed!” grumbled Daddy Broccoli. “Someone’s been lying in my bed!” grumbled Mama Broccoli. “Someone’s been lying in my bed – and he’s still there!” grumbled Baby Broccoli.

 

Brock noticed the three pieces of Broccoli. “Ahhhhhhh!” He ran downstairs as fast as he could and back into his house. From that moment, Brock was too scared to go there ever again.

 

By Ruben Pargeter

Bob and the Three Bears

Once upon a time there was a hairy wolf, his name was Bob.

One day Bob was walking in the forest. He saw a house made of gum balls. Bob knocked on the door but know body was there.

Bob saw three bowls of curry on the table “yumm my favourite”. He went to the first bowl “ouch this is too hot “. He moved to the next bowl “yuck this is too cold”. He moved to the last bowl “mmm this is just right”.

He was a bit tired now so he looked around for a chair .he found three chairs with cushions on them, bob sat on the first chair “this is too hard” exclaimed bob .He sat on the next.”This chair is too soft” He moved to the last chair.”This chair is just right”

Bob was really tired now so he went upstairs he hoped onto the biggest bed. “This bed is too lumpy” So he moved to the next bed “this bed is broken” Then he skipped to the last “this is just right”. Soon the bears came home “hey someone’s been eating my curry grumbled daddy bear.

Meanwhile bob heard people talking. So he started running down the stairs. All the bears were running upstairs to get ready for bed when suddenly Bob bumped into daddy bear. Bob started screaming and ran outside he was never seen again!

 

By Esmee

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